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Bodies, Girls, Hate

(a Novel Series, Pilot Episode, & Season II Premier Script)

Bodies Pilot

Read the Pilot Episode: "Pieces of You" on The Black List

Bodies Pilot

Download  the Pilot Episode: "Pieces of You" on Coverfly

The Novel

Read the First Three Chapters of the 1st novel in the series: Bodies

The Book Trailer

The Book Trailer for the Novel Bodies

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Bodies Synopsis

Bodies is a literary thriller set in present-day Quantico, Virginia. It follows Agent Sylvie James' two-year stint as a behavioral analyst for the FBI's Behavioral Research and Investigative Unit (BRIU), intertwining her private and professional worlds. It is a homage, not to serial killers, but to those who hunt them. As the Nietzche quote goes: "Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster...." 


Sylvie is a warrior in the trenches of the mind. A series of events led her down this solitary road, and she has stared long into the abyss. However, in her relationship with Jane, she discovered the gateway to heaven. The conflict between these two worlds never ceases. This is Sylvie's journey through the gray battleground between light and darkness—evil, if you will. Sometimes, evil wins; often, it forces a hunt, and it may appear defeated but always returns. When it glares back, Sylvie can't deny its presence or how it will change her. 


Bodies begins with a serial killer revealing that he has stalked Sylvie beyond her time with the FBI. The story takes us back to answer the question of what sets one on the path of pursuing evil—an encounter with evil, the catalyst to a shift in destiny from creative writing to a student of the criminal mind. The book follows Sylvie's prior cases while investigators pursue her stalker—a man who has killed in her wake as she chased monsters and lived her life. 


The cases are gruesome, and the relationship with Jane is loving. It's a play on extremes that finds the hero caught in the gray area. The visuals play on the extremes; different worlds are at war: good vs. evil, intimacy versus distance. The visuals clash, a beautiful forest, a child, and a loyal dog, conflicting with the bodies of murdered children. There is also an underlying soundtrack in Sylvie's head; this makes her relatable; she's a real person assigned a horrible task, via choice or destiny. It's a mesh of sensory perceptions—with conflict furthering the gray area between extremes. 


In Sylvie's cases, we rarely meet the murderer because this is about the hunter. The evil-doer is left to the readers interpretation given the damage done. That's Sylvie's world—interpretation of the five W's: Who? What? Where? When? & Why? The Why is the disturbing point, inspiring curiosity, and will catch a psychopath in the end. 


We've all met a psychopath, or at the minimum a narcissist, and sometimes find traces of their behaviors in ourselves; life is, at the bottom line, a game of survival. This is life and death, and we make choices. Sylvie survived a violent assault, that altered her destiny, changed her character and theme. In that regard, Bodies plays on the roots of storytelling, which is also how Sylvie catches the perpetrators. There's a beginning, middle, and end to every journey. 


A single event delivered Sylvie to Charlottesville and meeting Jane, who is the antithesis of plain Jane and Jane Doe. Who is Jane Doe, and why is she lost? Why does plain Jane never just become Jane? Why is rape still an issue? The role of mothers matters; sex matters; it all matters. In the end, who is responsible? Guilty? Who are the monsters? Sometimes, Sylvie wonders if she stared into the abyss too long because the truth is that it is always looking back at her through the world. And, in the end, it all must be confronted. 



Book Trailer: Bodies

Query

S. M. Tolhurst

Number, Street Name

City, State, Zipcode

smtolhurst@gmail.com /505-795-9840


Agent/Manager X

Number, Street Name

City, State, Zip Code


Dear Agent,


The FBI's least conventional candidate, Sylvie James, once proved herself the top choice for the behavioral science mindhunter investigating sexual predators, Dr. Dell Worthington. Sylvie comes from an unstable childhood and violent experience but possesses a remarkable storytelling gift.  When the unfamiliar strikes familiar, instinct drives her to understand, and when things that belong disappear (like children), curiosity betrays reason, and her effort to tell the story of what happened, why, and who perpetrated the event proves relentless and psychologically dangerous. It's that long gaze into the abyss referenced in a Nietzsche quote—"The Abyss gazes also into you."


Not only has the Justice Department taken notice of Sylvie but a killer—a stalker, who has chosen his last victim, Special Agent Sylvie James.


Told in a non-linear style, Bodies takes us on Sylvie's journey from off-campus housing at Ohio State, where her destination forever changed, to falling in love with Jane, and joining the FBI's Behavior Research and Investigative Unit (BRIU) under the wing of her mentor, Dr. Worthington. 


We open in the present; Sylvie's stalker has surfaced to reveal his crimes and obsession.  He has followed the course of her cases and personal life while committing murders in her wake.  To stop him before he kills again, BRIU investigators, Sylvie, and a by-the-book idealist from the attorney general's office, must delve into her past cases and intensely private world.


At the core of Bodies lies a love story pitted against the backdrop of a dark and unnerving world, allowing for moving and disturbing passages delivered in the same breath. It's a Carol Shields literary novel running from a James Patterson thriller in the Appalachian Mountain Range. 


Dramatic stories are the core of my arsenal, stocked with the bitter-sweet essence of real life and the triggers that cue us. I'm a novelist at heart with a BA in film, a teller of tales of love and loss. 



Bodies comes in at 86,000 words and is the first in a series of three books.  I thank you in advance for your consideration.


Sincerely,



S. M. Tolhurst



Book II & Proposed Season II


Former FBI Behaviorist Sylvie James once stared into the abyss of human evil and found something broken within herself. Now a serial killer and a survivor compel her gaze back at the risk of love and sanity in the Sunshine State.



"I still remember the moment when my gaze fell upon the mutilated face of a young woman, her features slashed through with a bayonet.  Soundlessly, and without fuss, some tender thing deep inside me broke.  Something that, until then, I hadn't realisedwas there." 

                                                                          ― Han Kang, Human Acts

 


Novel II - Girls

The Han Kang quote reveals the nature of this story; it is not a profiler vs. serial killer re-do; it's a profiler vs. herself tale.

Read 1st 3 Chapters

Bodies Script - End of the World

Former FBI Behaviorist Sylvie James once stared into the abyss of human evil and found something broken within herself. Now a serial killer and a survivor compel her gaze back at the risk of love and sanity in the Sunshine State.

Download the Script

Season II Premier Episode

Bodies - "End of the World" was so well received by readers, that S.M. Tolhurst considered making it the Pilot for "Bodies."

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